Saturday, March 4, 2017

The Queen Who Saved Her People

A Poem About Purim

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There’s a book in the Bible that’s a nail-biting thriller.
It’s often read at Purim. Some call it the Megillah.
There is one thing about it that some readers find quite odd—
in all the book’s ten chapters, there is no mention of God.

The heroine is Esther, a brave and beautiful queen
who saves her people, the Jews, from a diabolic scheme.
There’s another queen in the story, Vashti is her name;
she defied King Ahasuerus and brought upon him shame,

therefore, Queen Vashti was banished, and a new queen was sought.
The young virgins of Susa, to the citadel, were brought.
With oil of myrrh and spices, they were groomed and primped and primed
till the king selected the maiden he deemed most sublime.

Exquisite Esther found favor with him. Soon she was crowned
the new queen of Susa, regally bejeweled and begowned!
The fact that she was Jewish, the queen kept well concealed;
for like an abba, Mordecai said, “Keep your royal lips sealed!”

Mordecai had raised her like his daughter; an upstanding man—
He overheard a plot brewing against the king of the land,
so the murderous plot was foiled; hanged were the two thugs,
but Mordecai received no thanks, no reward, and no hugs.

Hated was Mordecai by Haman, the aide to the king,
for the Jew would not bow down and to Haman homage bring.
Haman schmoozed with the king and received a promotion
but his hatred for the Jews stirred a sinister notion.

Haman devised a foul plan to annihilate the Jews.
This plot divulged to Mordecai was deep, dark, evil news.
Mordecai implored Queen Esther to go before the king
to beg him to halt Haman’s plan by the seal of his ring.

It was dangerous, indeed, for the woman he cherished,
but Queen Esther insisted, “If I perish, I perish!”
She called for her people and maids to keep a three-day fast,
then inhaled a deep breath and did something extremely rash—

She planned a lush banquet; invited her king and Haman.
Over wine, she revealed to her king, Haman’s evil plan.
The villain was sent to the gallows; hanged till he was dead
and dear old Mordecai had honors heaped upon his head!

The king affixed his seal to an edict that saved the Jews—
Throughout the kingdom of Susa that was the greatest news!
Now each Purim Esther gets a commemorative nod
and although He wasn’t mentioned, so does the hand of God!

Maude Carolan Pych


  1. You told this story in such a lovely way, Maude-- Congratulations on your award!

  2. I love the book of Esther and the story of a strong, heroic woman, making a difference. Thank you, Kathy, for commenting.